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[sid] => 133538
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Holding on to Hope
[time] => 2007-04-15 10:43:54
[hometext] => Please comment on my poem and let me know what you think, i accept all forms of criticism
[bodytext] => As the sun slowly fades behind a tall mountain in the sky I burry my head in my pillow to hide my face and cry Yesterday she told me I was different than the rest Today my heart was shattered and torn out of my Chest I guess being different does't mean to be better And now lonlyness covers me like an oversized sweater I'm told that every dog will eventually have his day So I hold out hope that true love will eventually come my way So tommorow when the sun rises to meet the blue clear sky My head will emerge from my pillow with not a solitary tear in my eye [comments] => 3 [counter] => 308 [topic] => 2 [informant] => raging_bull13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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