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You think your beauty is so true
I guess your fried, bleached hair
Certainly becomes you
Oh Miss Beauty Queen
Your skin is so bronzed
Who needs a sun
When you worship the salon
Silly Miss Beauty Queen
You think your eyes sparkle like stars
But the clumps of black and blue paste
Look like tarantulas from afar
Stupid little Beauty Queen
You are so slim
Starvation has certainly
become a wonderful trend
Ignorant little Beauty Queen
All the men prove your ploys are so effective
Until they discover the plastic Barbie doll is defective
Second-hand Beauty Queen
You've been returned to manufacturing
All of that effort to be pretty
Must not be working
Dear Miss Beauty Queen
Beauty is skin deep but you continue to try
Your outsides may be pretty
but hideousness hides inside
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Barbie

Contributed by AnastasiaN on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 09:36:07 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Dear Miss Beauty Queen
You think your beauty is so true
I guess your fried, bleached hair
Certainly becomes you
Oh Miss Beauty Queen
Your skin is so bronzed
Who needs a sun
When you worship the salon
Silly Miss Beauty Queen
You think your eyes sparkle like stars
But the clumps of black and blue paste
Look like tarantulas from afar
Stupid little Beauty Queen
You are so slim
Starvation has certainly
become a wonderful trend
Ignorant little Beauty Queen
All the men prove your ploys are so effective
Until they discover the plastic Barbie doll is defective
Second-hand Beauty Queen
You've been returned to manufacturing
All of that effort to be pretty
Must not be working
Dear Miss Beauty Queen
Beauty is skin deep but you continue to try
Your outsides may be pretty
but hideousness hides inside

Copyright © AnastasiaN ... [ 2007-04-15 09:36:07]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Barbie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:11:25 AM AEST
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wow, very harsh...AND I LOVE IT!

truly wonderful, you have a lot of slams against those "beauty queens", and it just never ends, and i love it.

great write.

- Bethani -

Re: Barbie (User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 11:29:11 AM AEST
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Nicely put....Yeah, us real women can't help but hate (skin-deep) beauty queens. when they're so caught up in what they simply look like, they forget there's a whole 'nother side to them....poor, poor, deprived girls. I have no sympathy for them. But lots of men just play into that and love that ideal Beauty Queen and measure every girl up to her. the jerks.
hang in there.

~April

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