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the hope
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The Hope
Today the stones on the outer field cast
no shadows birds dont sing and the wind
doesnt blow through grey oaks crowns.
Today is full of melancholy that I cant
shake off a sense of futility, she rang and
told me that she doesnt love me anymore.
Today my heart is full of sorrow wishes
the impossible that she will relent come
back and unburden this my longest day.
Today, this afternoon, the sun warmed my
face, whispered her name a hundred times
and know that love will come my way again.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2003-02-26 11:40:00]
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Re: the hope
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:59:03 PM AEST
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A fine poem. You managed to evoke that sense of melancholy with your image juxtaposition and story.
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