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[title] => Hating Heaven
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I wonder will heaven let me in
I know I haven’t been
The best I could be
But I hope they can see
I just couldn’t be the man
I was suppose to become
Pre Chorus
Without her in my life
Everyday is so dark
Just so unbearable
Without her my adorable
Chorus
Heaven can’t you understand
I couldn’t handle my life
You let her go and I do
Desire so much to follow
Her into heaven
Oh I sit here to beg and plead
As I wait here and bleed
Tears of sorrow
For the one you took away
From me
-Pre Chorus
-Chorus 2x
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Hating Heaven
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hating Heaven
I wonder will heaven let me in
I know I haven’t been
The best I could be
But I hope they can see
I just couldn’t be the man
I was suppose to become
Pre Chorus
Without her in my life
Everyday is so dark
Just so unbearable
Without her my adorable
Chorus
Heaven can’t you understand
I couldn’t handle my life
You let her go and I do
Desire so much to follow
Her into heaven
Oh I sit here to beg and plead
As I wait here and bleed
Tears of sorrow
For the one you took away
From me
-Pre Chorus
-Chorus 2x
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by D-Day on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:07:30 AM AEST
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very good way of putting your words. whoever she is knows how much you miss her, and if you want to get into heaven, don't focus on all the things you've done in the past, just look ahead to the future to see how you can change, because all you have to do is let God into your life and just follow in his footsteps and you will go to heaven.
"Everything is ok in the end, and if it's not, then it's not the end." |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:21:41 AM AEST
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| sad, but very well writen....it is a hard thing to deal with the loss of a loved one....keep going and keep writing and things will look up for you... |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:42:24 AM AEST
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| So sad to loose someone dear,I'm sure they are looking down with you blowing angel kisses! Christina |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by Jilly on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 02:48:41 PM AEST
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Live your life, that's what she would want! She will be waiting for you in Heaven... Don't be in such a hurry to get there, even though all that we desire is there waiting for us...
Great write....it's beautiful..
Luv, Jilly |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 11:23:50 PM AEST
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My friend? Heaven isn't that far away.
She dwells in your heart!
Can't get much closer!
Love your work!!!!!
Angel Always......
Godspeed! |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:05:44 AM AEST
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| A beautiful, heart wrenching poem. reading this made me feel the same way as i felt when i watched the movie horse whisperer! |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by rustygrl33 on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 08:17:57 PM AEST
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| thats really good |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:49:37 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful...i have written a poem about hating heaven but it was on a different tangent to this...and nowhere near as good...this is brilliant.... |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 04:32:41 PM AEST
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| ive been waitin for a while to see when someone will get the true meaning of the poem... i thank everyone that read it and commented on it but no one seems to see what i truly meant when i wrote this one... i never actually lost someone as in death... i lost them to someone else and when you loose someone to someone else you feel kind of contempt towards them... thats the meanin of this poem... you feel like doin some bad stuff but don't and keep it held inside and here i use heaven as God that judges me of my thoughts... you can sin and think about sinning both are as bad as each other |
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Re: Hating Heaven
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by Dot on
Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 06:43:06 PM AEST
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| People move in and out of our lives constantly. There will be someone else to come along when the time is right. Focus on the future and leave the past behind you. Dot |
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