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[sid] => 133452
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Is Anything Sacred Anymore?
[time] => 2007-04-12 07:23:10
[hometext] => Please Comment on this poem, help help myself write better
[bodytext] => I was walking down the road today moving about aimlessly trying to find my way I saw young girl who was maybe seventeen her clothes were little and her eyes were mean bruises were evident on her body also in her soul the devil had her by the had but would not let her go as I passed her by I felt the coldness of her heart seeing a young girl so pretty and smart I'll never understand how a decent girl becomes a whore As I sit and wonder " is anything sacred anymore?" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 43 [informant] => raging_bull13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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