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Some Savior I Am
Contributed by
Channing
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Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 03:08:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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My God I can feel her,
Shes dieing
Just to keep me here,
But as long as I stay
She suffers,
For the beasts rage builds
Whenever I am around
And its hunger for her flesh
Strengthens, making the beast greedy,
I want to take her away
Save her from this beast
Show her a life without suffering,
But she wont let me
For she loves the beast and I,
And does not with to choose
Between us,
Thus I must watch her suffer,
Feeling her pain,
My God I feel her,
Shes dieing,
My love is dieing
And Im a mere fool
Too weak to save her,
I only get to watch
With me tear-filled eyes
As my love slowly dies
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2007-03-29 15:08:56]
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Re: Some Savior I Am
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by Crow on
Thursday, 12th April 2007 @ 08:59:45 AM AEST
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Channing" I know what your discribing here,
and I know the dilemma you have faced.
I think this is a very good write..and thank you for stopping by to read me. Vincent |
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