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Spring Has Sprung
Contributed by
sadaddy
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Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 01:37:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Spring has sprung With the abundance Of blossoming flowers
The feel of affection With kindling of love When two souls meet
The spring bring such delight In the early morning light With hearts of satisfaction
Spring brings sweet smells Of lily of the valley Where the green grass grows
Where the water flows And children are playing With fun and laughter
One would say that Spring has sprung With such loveliness
That can only be felt This time of year With such an exhilaration
Copyright ©
sadaddy
... [
2007-03-29 01:37:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Spring Has Sprung
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 01:11:18 PM AEST (User
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It is a beautiful welcome poem with simple rhythmic words. I liked the visualization of the season.
A very good poem indeed.
FRANCO. |
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Re: Spring Has Sprung
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 08:20:59 AM AEST (User
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| This was an excellent poem. I really loved the imagery in this poem. Excellent job! |
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