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Without Dreams
Contributed by
merry
on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 10:56:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Valid complaints in my head tell my heart
Not to stay too long or get too close
My head knows what consequences await
My foolish heart thats so exposed
Expecting love to conquer all
Planting words like lovers seeds
Across your brow the ashes spread
Chaining you to love thats dead
Sleepless night in loves abandoned grave
A single flame I light for you
Some comfort in such little hope
Springs the dream of eternal
Weve traversed the universe
Starved and stranded by the grave
Thirsty for passion we yearn
To touch what we cannot have
Nor hold until the morning light
Daring not to trust in dreams
Copyright ©
merry
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2007-03-18 10:56:10]
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Re: Without Dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:02:09 PM AEST
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| nicely done. it has a good flow, and i especially liked the last line |
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