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Array ( [sid] => 132741 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Paper Heart [time] => 2007-03-15 12:25:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My Paper heart.
Which you yourself have torn apart.

Thrown it down upon the ground.
For all the pieces to be scattered around.

Never thinking about how I feel.
Never helping me deal.

Deal with all the pain I have been put through.
All the pain I thought disappeared when I met you.

But now I guess it was all wrong.
Just like another tragic love song.

Starts off good the heart does mend.
Til finally you get to the end.

My Paper heart so fragile and weak.
Now scattered around and blowing into the creek.

Never to mend because of you.
Never again to find a love so true.

Hurt now fills that empty place.
My mind now filled with the image of your face.

My ears filled with your voice so cold.
The words you uttered so mean and bold.

My paper heart I gave to you.
Now scatterd and torn apart in two.

Leaving me hurt and in despair.
Not at all showing you care.

Watching the tears fall down my cheek.
Making me feel so helpless and week.

I gave to you all that I had.
All you gave to me was the constant feeling of being sad.

Never filling the gap in my soul.
Never wanting to make me feel whole.

My paper heart
Now shredded and torn apart.

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My Paper Heart

Contributed by Loriann on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:25:22 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My Paper heart.
Which you yourself have torn apart.

Thrown it down upon the ground.
For all the pieces to be scattered around.

Never thinking about how I feel.
Never helping me deal.

Deal with all the pain I have been put through.
All the pain I thought disappeared when I met you.

But now I guess it was all wrong.
Just like another tragic love song.

Starts off good the heart does mend.
Til finally you get to the end.

My Paper heart so fragile and weak.
Now scattered around and blowing into the creek.

Never to mend because of you.
Never again to find a love so true.

Hurt now fills that empty place.
My mind now filled with the image of your face.

My ears filled with your voice so cold.
The words you uttered so mean and bold.

My paper heart I gave to you.
Now scatterd and torn apart in two.

Leaving me hurt and in despair.
Not at all showing you care.

Watching the tears fall down my cheek.
Making me feel so helpless and week.

I gave to you all that I had.
All you gave to me was the constant feeling of being sad.

Never filling the gap in my soul.
Never wanting to make me feel whole.

My paper heart
Now shredded and torn apart.

Copyright © Loriann ... [ 2007-03-15 12:25:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Paper Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by kelkel on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:35:41 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one very nice poem

Re: My Paper Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 01:00:00 PM AEST
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wow really good i love it i know how you feel my ex was saying to me he loved me and wanted me whilest saying to my best friend he wanted her so i know the feel of a broken heart but now i have found some one even better and you will aswell just keep belivin

Re: My Paper Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 01:26:27 PM AEST
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I gave to you all that I had.
All you gave to me was the constant feeling of being sad.

I can so relate to this. Excellent piece Loriann. Thx. for sharing.

Re: My Paper Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 07:51:46 PM AEST
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I know what it likes to feel empty inside like that... Nicely done. It's too bad that many of us can relate to this. I hope everything works out for you.

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