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Array ( [sid] => 132347 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not Done Yet And No Title [time] => 2007-03-03 22:17:23 [hometext] => not done yet but still good in my opinion [bodytext] => Then was then, now is now,
and tomorrow is soon to be.
So I take out a box, hold your hand,
and lean down on just one knee.

I say what you want to hear,
making promises hard to keep,
Wondering why I''m so lucky,
as I watch you fall fast asleep.

Today is that special day,
where we will finally unite.
Of coarse everyone knows,
what else will happen tonight.

Nothing can get much better than this,
since our life is filled with such joy.
"On the contrary" Doc says,
"congradulations, it''s a boy!"

It happened all of a sudden,
so quickly and fast.
Doc says "I don''t know,
just how long she will last."

I pray she will make it,
then everything will be ok.
But the day our baby was born,
...was her very last day.

I give up on everything,
and say I''m all done.
But she easily changed my mind,
the moment i saw our beautiful son.

Now we''re right here,
on this very day.
He told me man to man,
"I have my own son on the way." [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Baby_Teddy_Bu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Not Done Yet And No Title

Contributed by Baby_Teddy_Bu on Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 10:17:23 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Then was then, now is now,
and tomorrow is soon to be.
So I take out a box, hold your hand,
and lean down on just one knee.

I say what you want to hear,
making promises hard to keep,
Wondering why I''m so lucky,
as I watch you fall fast asleep.

Today is that special day,
where we will finally unite.
Of coarse everyone knows,
what else will happen tonight.

Nothing can get much better than this,
since our life is filled with such joy.
"On the contrary" Doc says,
"congradulations, it''s a boy!"

It happened all of a sudden,
so quickly and fast.
Doc says "I don''t know,
just how long she will last."

I pray she will make it,
then everything will be ok.
But the day our baby was born,
...was her very last day.

I give up on everything,
and say I''m all done.
But she easily changed my mind,
the moment i saw our beautiful son.

Now we''re right here,
on this very day.
He told me man to man,
"I have my own son on the way."

Copyright © Baby_Teddy_Bu ... [ 2007-03-03 22:17:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Not Done Yet And No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 10:43:49 PM AEST
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I hope you finish it soon.It is beautiful.

Brian

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