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[aid] => mick
[title] => ~Vulnerable~
[time] => 2007-02-25 00:45:55
[hometext] => Too personal for my own comment here, but, would appreciate yours at the end...Thank you!
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Not unlike many~
she'd raced away from before
Yet, unlike any~
gave chase & would not be ignored...
How dare such intrude~
on her chosen awareness
Unprepared to elude~
this utter raw bareness...
All kept in the depths hidden~
was out being tore
The pain of which was far beyond~
that she'd ever bore...
How had she become~
so vulnerable...so careless...
That within her realm warred~
'realitys' unfairness...
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 410
[topic] => 61
[informant] => MisfitMe
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[score] => 40
[ratings] => 8
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => selfstruggles
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~Vulnerable~
Contributed by
MisfitMe
on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 12:45:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Not unlike many~
she'd raced away from before
Yet, unlike any~
gave chase & would not be ignored...
How dare such intrude~
on her chosen awareness
Unprepared to elude~
this utter raw bareness...
All kept in the depths hidden~
was out being tore
The pain of which was far beyond~
that she'd ever bore...
How had she become~
so vulnerable...so careless...
That within her realm warred~
'realitys' unfairness...
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 12:57:21 AM AEST
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Very moving write.
Good work.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:33:40 AM AEST
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| wow..this is an excellent write. I think I know what you're getting at. congrats. |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 02:34:03 AM AEST
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My friend it is a very intense and emotional poem, your heart crunching verses moved my vulnerable heart for a long time;
"All kept in the depths hidden~
was out being tore
The pain of which was far beyond~
that she'd ever bore..."
So painful indeed.
FRANCO |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by yangdantien on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:07:39 PM AEST
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Bravo with tear trickling applause.
Your piece made me feel things I half-realize but had not pieced together.
Reality is not just what is made real.
Fairness is an illusion.
Vulnerability is a fact.
Compassion from the heart,
sound wisdom with hope for the best & Love,
bridges the cold hard truths.
Many take the easy path and things get harder.
Do the hard things now and things get easier.
Then realize people can talk themselves into anything.
Thank You for the Clarity.
Blessings & Salutations
AJ
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by Bleedthelove on
Sunday, 25th February 2007 @ 01:48:47 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. Great job on this. |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by needledancing on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 08:37:47 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written...It reminds me of my own healing journey taken delicately out of me and shredding me before finding the peace of letting go of all old pains...thank you |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 02:15:53 PM AEST
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A beautiful write. My guess is, it's about a trust issue with some one. lovely poem never the less . . .
Ben |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 08:01:04 PM AEST
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oh my gosh hun ... soooooooo relatable. (and painful to read)
I rarely "steal" another's comment, but, for me, AJ really
stated a truth that is hard to swallow. (At least for
the dreamers, no?)
Excellent post, hun. In the most vulnerable of emotions, I
try to wrap myself in hope. It is, truly, the only thing that
keeps my soul from screaming its lungs out!
Thank you for this. : ) It's perfect.
~Breezy |
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Re: ~Vulnerable~
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 12:15:37 PM AEST
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Touched a nerve with this one. Wow, sis. We so need to get together some day. Work together and sort schtuff out.
Peace,
Laura |
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