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Array ( [sid] => 131999 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How it should be [time] => 2007-02-22 16:30:20 [hometext] => Marriage is not just a piece of paper, not a fairy tale wedding and dress for a princess, its a unity of two souls and pure 100% unconditional love ..................... [bodytext] => How it should be.....

They're standing in the corner, at the party where you went
You stare from afar,feeling faint such beauty heaven sent
Perfect eyes, perfect teeth, perfect smile to match
You look away and back again, stolen moments that you snatch

Your heart it beats a 100 times faster than is normal
Your head feels light you want to faint but this is all hormonal
Those butterflies have multiplied, to near a million now
You lose your ability to speak, you're mesmorised and how

Before you know it you are wed and walking down that aisle
You knew inside your heart and soul no doubts for you......... nor denial
You wonder will you wake up soon and find its all a dream
The happiest couple upon this earth your faces glow and beam

You took your vows and meaning them shared tears just one or two
Those words and your commitments vowed got to the very heart of you
You start your married life and know...... THIS is the ONE
Doubts or fears or cares atall assured that you have none

The key is oh so simple now,you finally got it right
To give to one another unconditionally from day into the night
For love is unconditional no rules no competitions
You give and give and receive far more...... no need for any submissions

This love is like a food we eat and share with those we love
You fit together in every way just like that perfect glove
It's up to both to keep that love and innocense still going
And Love for evermore you'll know, Forever your love... be glowing. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Malcolmsdreamgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
How it should be

Contributed by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 04:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



How it should be.....

They're standing in the corner, at the party where you went
You stare from afar,feeling faint such beauty heaven sent
Perfect eyes, perfect teeth, perfect smile to match
You look away and back again, stolen moments that you snatch

Your heart it beats a 100 times faster than is normal
Your head feels light you want to faint but this is all hormonal
Those butterflies have multiplied, to near a million now
You lose your ability to speak, you're mesmorised and how

Before you know it you are wed and walking down that aisle
You knew inside your heart and soul no doubts for you......... nor denial
You wonder will you wake up soon and find its all a dream
The happiest couple upon this earth your faces glow and beam

You took your vows and meaning them shared tears just one or two
Those words and your commitments vowed got to the very heart of you
You start your married life and know...... THIS is the ONE
Doubts or fears or cares atall assured that you have none

The key is oh so simple now,you finally got it right
To give to one another unconditionally from day into the night
For love is unconditional no rules no competitions
You give and give and receive far more...... no need for any submissions

This love is like a food we eat and share with those we love
You fit together in every way just like that perfect glove
It's up to both to keep that love and innocense still going
And Love for evermore you'll know, Forever your love... be glowing.




Copyright © Malcolmsdreamgirl ... [ 2007-02-22 16:30:20]
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Re: How it should be (User Rating: 1 )
by Whatsername on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 05:12:59 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem!! It brought tears of love to my eyes. Great on capturing the image of true unconditional love!


Re: How it should be (User Rating: 1 )
by Grownbabygirl on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 05:45:51 PM AEST
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That was very nice and oh so very true.


Re: How it should be (User Rating: 1 )
by christsfollower on Thursday, 22nd February 2007 @ 07:24:37 PM AEST
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wow, I'm a teenager living in America and I've gotta tell you, that's what I have to be looking forward to. This was a great poem, and I hope you and your wife are eternally happy. I also liked the rhyme scheme :D

~God Bless


Re: How it should be (User Rating: 1 )
by Postcard_From_Heaven on Friday, 23rd February 2007 @ 07:39:26 AM AEST
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Can walk in the feel some lost some .scare .empty.
i learn alot of your feel and magic of words.

Postcard_From_Heaven.
We love it,


Re: How it should be (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:31:55 AM AEST
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This is a peice of perfection in the poetic pie.

lovely work.


Ben




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