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Array ( [sid] => 131942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused [time] => 2007-02-21 00:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My heart is pulsing with love and desire for you but confusion as well. I give my all to you but you just push me away. Just when i think nothing can break our bond, you break my heart. when were together we are so far apart and when were apart we become so close. my love for u is unexplainable and bursting with emotion and lust for it is as strong as a solid stone and filled with such determination. people say i am stupid, ignorant, foolish,and blind for loving you for all i get in return is pain and dispare, but my faith in you is forever and never ending.

But were do you lie? why do you show me so much confusion. do you enjoy causing me emotional pain? i cant keep playing your games. feeling used and when i am worn out to you, you trade me in and expect me to wait. wait around when ever your other relationships don't work. what am i to do? what do i do to understand you? i need you to love me for me and only me, because this confusion is just to much for me to take. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 43 [informant] => babygirlholly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Confused

Contributed by babygirlholly on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



My heart is pulsing with love and desire for you but confusion as well. I give my all to you but you just push me away. Just when i think nothing can break our bond, you break my heart. when were together we are so far apart and when were apart we become so close. my love for u is unexplainable and bursting with emotion and lust for it is as strong as a solid stone and filled with such determination. people say i am stupid, ignorant, foolish,and blind for loving you for all i get in return is pain and dispare, but my faith in you is forever and never ending.

But were do you lie? why do you show me so much confusion. do you enjoy causing me emotional pain? i cant keep playing your games. feeling used and when i am worn out to you, you trade me in and expect me to wait. wait around when ever your other relationships don't work. what am i to do? what do i do to understand you? i need you to love me for me and only me, because this confusion is just to much for me to take.




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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 10:18:00 AM AEST
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babygirlholly, What an emotionally filled piece you have presented your readers with. I just can't understand why a girl would tolerate and/or give a obvious player so many chances to toy with their emotions. Its really sad that some guys look at girls as objects or play things while messing with and confusing their emotions. I liked what you had to say here as I am certain many others will as well. Good job and thank you for sharing both yourself and your writing talent with us all.

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Re: Confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Postcard_From_Heaven on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 11:01:48 AM AEST
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Ohhh. Much be strong if you true love and need the1 belong to you..i understand what you feel now.. Do you sincere to..? Do you think he is the1 for you..? How much you turst he..? My friend let you try again and strong if you sure to be right decide love.! And d't control feel let the answer is natural.. 1 good for he. 2 you much prove how much real love and do it..(good thing) to be gentln ,responsibi... 3 show and open the feel much have time to talk or take some romantic place talk face to face and look he eyes 4 love can change some thing if want life togetter with no more no less .. 5 Love ,need,precious,proud,perform,honest pray you wish true love the 1for you i holp he know how much you love you care and need tobe with forever... wish you lucky My friend Postcard_from_heaven




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