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Array ( [sid] => 131920 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Thread [time] => 2007-02-20 10:59:04 [hometext] => First poem on YPDC [bodytext] => Every day it stress more
as one burden after another
is tied on the end;
they start to smother

Fabric is such a soft thing
not tough like steel
its load bearing capabilities
are extremely genteel

It hasn't snapped yet
but I suspect it will soon
No answers come to me
when I divine with the rune

The waiting's so hard
as the fabric quivers in stress
Collapse is imminent
Under so much duress [comments] => 5 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 21 [informant] => EarlofLeicester [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Thread

Contributed by EarlofLeicester on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 10:59:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Every day it stress more
as one burden after another
is tied on the end;
they start to smother

Fabric is such a soft thing
not tough like steel
its load bearing capabilities
are extremely genteel

It hasn't snapped yet
but I suspect it will soon
No answers come to me
when I divine with the rune

The waiting's so hard
as the fabric quivers in stress
Collapse is imminent
Under so much duress

Copyright © EarlofLeicester ... [ 2007-02-20 10:59:04]
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Re: The Thread (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:13:59 AM AEST
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I like this as it as "a thread "could be our feelings, our lives, any delicate line that links us all to life...good write

Re: The Thread (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 11:15:16 AM AEST
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Hmmm.....Not bad for a first post. Yes, stress can be more than one, expects.....Yet, it can be flowed though, with such grace. Set the mind, to let it flow....dont dwendle on such a stagnated thing. Breath......all will fall where the pieces will lay. Thanks for sharing.

Brew~

Re: The Thread (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 20th February 2007 @ 12:16:49 PM AEST
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Gratefully the tapestry of life can recover around rips and tears as there is enough breathing room for all especially once it is unfurled as in this fine first offering. May I humbly add to consider reading your work aloud before you post as you may catch small inconsistencies to polish.

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: The Thread (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:19:18 AM AEST
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Awesome writing and welcome to our glbal family here.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: The Thread (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:21:51 PM AEST
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This was a good idea for a poem and I like the concept.
I tend to agree with Yangdantein that reading the write to yourself aloud can help find any hiccups in the flow or the ease of rhyme.
All in all well done my friend and welcome

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