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It's only Half Light
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 05:03:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You complete me, my every dream. Two hearts beating as one When youre not with me its only half light, half light when youre gone. A never ending emptiness , a broken mirror shattered beyond repair . Without you theres nothing, nothing but this empty space. A broken heart and tear stained eyes, visions of our future tainted in yesterdays lies.Youre all that I am, my everything, my love light and tomorrows dreams. Without you Ill never be whole, always half way up yet half way down. Im forever searching searching for a reason , Im forever searching cause without you, Im incomplete.When youre not with me its only half light, half light when youre gone.
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Re: It's only Half Light
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 07:51:57 PM AEST
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lovely sentiments .. painful, but oh so intensely
romantic. You have penned a most heartwarming
and feeling plea. Who could not be affected by
words such as these? The last line seared my very soul.
You longing is evident. Such beautiful woe ~
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Re: It's only Half Light
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 12:31:18 PM AEST
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A powerful statement on the depths of love. Perfect for this time of year in spirit. I Love the stark truth of:
"...When you’re not with me it’s only half light, …half light when you’re gone." Excellent.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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