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Array ( [sid] => 131554 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Can't Move On [time] => 2007-02-08 23:54:07 [hometext] => even words don't come together when i'm hurting over you [bodytext] => I can't move on
You're hanging down from every tear
I'm not in love
And it's so empty with no one there
I watch you fall
I know it's real for you this time
So what was it with me then?
Or were you never really mine?

I won't forget
Three years of trying to fix this heart
I'm still the same
Pretending I don't fall apart
She knows you well
And you look good together
But I still wish this was just a frame
To cover up for what isn't there [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 22 [informant] => new_york_chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Can't Move On

Contributed by new_york_chick on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I can't move on
You're hanging down from every tear
I'm not in love
And it's so empty with no one there
I watch you fall
I know it's real for you this time
So what was it with me then?
Or were you never really mine?

I won't forget
Three years of trying to fix this heart
I'm still the same
Pretending I don't fall apart
She knows you well
And you look good together
But I still wish this was just a frame
To cover up for what isn't there

Copyright © new_york_chick ... [ 2007-02-08 23:54:07]
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Re: I Can't Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:27:29 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Please keep penning.
MPK

Re: I Can't Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 10:52:57 AM AEST
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a very heart felt write.. hang in there things will get better.. this is a very good expressive piece

vampyress jenni

Re: I Can't Move On (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:38:06 PM AEST
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In the words of a former New Yorker...'keep walking'
This piece resonates with all the work you do and bring to the forefront and thats why you cant move on. It is a bitter pill to swallow but once you realize it's all YOU, your heart, your connection, your effort, you will see how truly far away he is from matching your good energy. In thick Brooklyn drawl as my forefathers would say "Hey it takes 2 to Tango" so its OK to step off the dance floor.
Beside your wish-craft is better directed to what lays ahead for you.

Well Done

Peace
Yangdantien

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