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Array ( [sid] => 131545 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Hope [time] => 2007-02-08 17:27:08 [hometext] => wrote this because my granddad is in the hospital.. [bodytext] => All hope is lost today and forever
I can't convey how shocking this is, ever
Like a plane falling from the sky
That’s how this is in my mind
Other people experience these times
But I never contemplated they would be mine
My emotions are flying
Around and around
“Oh please be okay, Granddad,
Be safe and sound”
Here I lay on the ground
Hoping all worries could be banished
But that hope is gone, and worries are lavish
Soon when I fall asleep
The waterfall will unfreeze
And the stream will pour down
With such a graceful ease
There’s no stopping it at this instant
All that’s been done is so consistent
I just want something to collapse
Anything to give in
To make my life a little complicated less
And help me to be at an enduring rest [comments] => 4 [counter] => 2244 [topic] => 61 [informant] => linds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Lost Hope

Contributed by linds on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:27:08 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



All hope is lost today and forever
I can't convey how shocking this is, ever
Like a plane falling from the sky
That’s how this is in my mind
Other people experience these times
But I never contemplated they would be mine
My emotions are flying
Around and around
“Oh please be okay, Granddad,
Be safe and sound”
Here I lay on the ground
Hoping all worries could be banished
But that hope is gone, and worries are lavish
Soon when I fall asleep
The waterfall will unfreeze
And the stream will pour down
With such a graceful ease
There’s no stopping it at this instant
All that’s been done is so consistent
I just want something to collapse
Anything to give in
To make my life a little complicated less
And help me to be at an enduring rest




Copyright © linds ... [ 2007-02-08 17:27:08]
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Re: Lost Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:06:52 PM AEST
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beautiful words and i understand how it feels.
best of prayers and stay strong.


Re: Lost Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by SaintzAndSinnerz on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:38:03 PM AEST
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Aww. i hope your granddad is okay. God bless.


Re: Lost Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:02:12 AM AEST
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a very good penned out write.. sorry to hear about your grandfather I hope he gets better quickly..

vampyress Jenni


Re: Lost Hope (User Rating: 1 )
by smilin_eyes on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 06:59:05 PM AEST
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i know how u feel...just dont give up...just always remember good things never stay long...

hoping the best for u...

~smilin_eyes~




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