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I cant believe this pain.
Your viens.
My heart.
Weeping.
Bleeding apart.

The Scars of before.
Never again i swore.
Not with me.
Bleeding these tears.
Weeping my heart.

Place the blame upon myself.
How did you bring yourself?
To sever.
Your skin. Weeping.
My Soul. Bleeding.

Wrenches at my heart.
At how unhappy you are.
To slice yourself apart.
Your bleeding.
Your weeping.

How can I help?
You carve into yourself.
I feel you pain.
Your bleeding heart.
My weeping heart.

If you ever do again.
Think of the pain.
When you cut your body.
You slice my heart.
Think.
Your bleeding my weeping heart. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 72 [informant] => Inverted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Bleeding My Weeping Heart

Contributed by Inverted on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 06:01:39 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

You cut yourself again.
I cant believe this pain.
Your viens.
My heart.
Weeping.
Bleeding apart.

The Scars of before.
Never again i swore.
Not with me.
Bleeding these tears.
Weeping my heart.

Place the blame upon myself.
How did you bring yourself?
To sever.
Your skin. Weeping.
My Soul. Bleeding.

Wrenches at my heart.
At how unhappy you are.
To slice yourself apart.
Your bleeding.
Your weeping.

How can I help?
You carve into yourself.
I feel you pain.
Your bleeding heart.
My weeping heart.

If you ever do again.
Think of the pain.
When you cut your body.
You slice my heart.
Think.
Your bleeding my weeping heart.

Copyright © Inverted ... [ 2007-02-04 18:01:39]
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Re: Bleeding My Weeping Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 06:04:31 PM AEST
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wow this is a very sad write but the wording is very pefected in this.. I really like this write.. however if this is yourself your referring to. cutting yourself isn't going to really ease the pain or take anything away.. it will just scar your skin and remind you of the other pain.. very well expressed..

vampyress Jenni

Re: Bleeding My Weeping Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ashleigh on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 04:08:17 PM AEST
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I really liked this, it was very deep, and on top of that I liked the rhyme scheme. I'm running into a lot of those today.

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