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" Living Dream "

The very first time that I saw your face
I thought my eyes had lied
god has touched the earth with your beauty
all the stars and the moon now hide
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The very first time that I kissed your lips
my tears turned into streams
I trembled with a vivid realization
I kissed my Living Dream
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The very first time that we made love
I could not breathe for days
my love with you is beautifully amazing
you took my breath away
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I suddenly woke up tomorrow morning
alone and full of gloom
you are no longer here my life is dark
my hearts an empty beatless tomb
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I search for you through all forever
please tell me your not gone
one single day without you here
is like my life too long!!!!!
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Penned By James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2001 James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2001 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

Copyright © 2001 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)

Copyright © 2001 HeartFelt TM

Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion

The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
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Living Dream

Contributed by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 11:35:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



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" Living Dream "

The very first time that I saw your face
I thought my eyes had lied
god has touched the earth with your beauty
all the stars and the moon now hide
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
The very first time that I kissed your lips
my tears turned into streams
I trembled with a vivid realization
I kissed my Living Dream
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
The very first time that we made love
I could not breathe for days
my love with you is beautifully amazing
you took my breath away
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
I suddenly woke up tomorrow morning
alone and full of gloom
you are no longer here my life is dark
my hearts an empty beatless tomb
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us
I search for you through all forever
please tell me your not gone
one single day without you here
is like my life too long!!!!!
Image Hosted by ImageShack.us

Penned By James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2001 James L. McHenry

Copyright © 2001 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

Copyright © 2001 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)

Copyright © 2001 HeartFelt TM

Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion

The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart




Copyright © MickeyPigKnuckles ... [ 2007-02-03 11:35:52]
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Re: Living Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 01:58:36 PM AEST
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wow what a very powerful write! over flowing with emotions. I really like the way you formed it and the words you use are very good; not to wordy, but enough to let the reader know how you feel! great and beautiful write.


Re: Living Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:52:13 PM AEST
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how one emotion goes to another. how life can pass you by. how so much can be happening then BANG! this poem reflects that and i enjoyed it. thank you for sharing.


Re: Living Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by europeanprincess on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:52:54 PM AEST
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how one emotion goes to another. how life can pass you by. how so much can be happening then BANG! this poem reflects that and i enjoyed it. thank you for sharing.


Re: Living Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 06:00:15 PM AEST
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such a good poem....she'll/he'll be back if she/he has a good heart




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