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Array ( [sid] => 131322 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => And Why Do I Let Myself Get Like This? [time] => 2007-02-03 02:05:33 [hometext] => This is a poem that I wrote more as a plea not so long ago! [bodytext] => Love is this the real cost?
Forever seems so long
But with pain seems so lost
I let you in gave you my all
And you took that and crushed it and let it fall
Why did you take my heart and leave me without
Yet i will still be here and I will love you no doubt
When will you see that too
All those words spoken in love what do they do
Was that what it was
Just tell me the truth
Because it cant hurt much worse
Then it already does
I feel empty
I feel used
Quit playing with my heart
I need you in my life dont leave me in the dark
And I love you with all my heart
But damn I cant keep going through this always from the start
Am I still going to be your number one tomorrow
Or will my heart be left in sorrow
With your anger you do stupid *****
With mine I'm not that easy to let go and foget
Is she as good as me
Because in love like me she will never be
Who listens when no one else will
Whos there and who tries to help things heal
I've tried my best yet still I'm lost
What do I have to give what will be the cost
Will this keep going on
Or will we both just be left alone
In this I'm scared
This is so much bare
Where is the sanity
Why do I feel so panicky
I'm spinning inside
I just want you to decide
Will my heart be crushed agian
Or will this all just begin
To leave us alone
Or what will it bestow
I am yours through thick and thin
But can we leave this alone and let love begin? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 55 [informant] => heatherslostdreams [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
And Why Do I Let Myself Get Like This?

Contributed by heatherslostdreams on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 02:05:33 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Love is this the real cost?
Forever seems so long
But with pain seems so lost
I let you in gave you my all
And you took that and crushed it and let it fall
Why did you take my heart and leave me without
Yet i will still be here and I will love you no doubt
When will you see that too
All those words spoken in love what do they do
Was that what it was
Just tell me the truth
Because it cant hurt much worse
Then it already does
I feel empty
I feel used
Quit playing with my heart
I need you in my life dont leave me in the dark
And I love you with all my heart
But damn I cant keep going through this always from the start
Am I still going to be your number one tomorrow
Or will my heart be left in sorrow
With your anger you do stupid *****
With mine I'm not that easy to let go and foget
Is she as good as me
Because in love like me she will never be
Who listens when no one else will
Whos there and who tries to help things heal
I've tried my best yet still I'm lost
What do I have to give what will be the cost
Will this keep going on
Or will we both just be left alone
In this I'm scared
This is so much bare
Where is the sanity
Why do I feel so panicky
I'm spinning inside
I just want you to decide
Will my heart be crushed agian
Or will this all just begin
To leave us alone
Or what will it bestow
I am yours through thick and thin
But can we leave this alone and let love begin?




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Re: And Why Do I Let Myself Get Like This? (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 10:43:07 AM AEST
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heatherslostdreams, once again you impress me with a beautiful orchestration of words with strong and deep meaning composed and organized into wonderful words of poetry for you readers to savor. You let yourself get like this as we all do because we all need and want to be loved as its a vital human element of survival. Its sad that through the means of media and hollywood productions that both love and relationships have become so distorted as they project that its ok to bounce from person to person and enjoy a moment of fake or a phony kind of love. Sorry for getting on my soap box lol. Great poem here.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)


Re: And Why Do I Let Myself Get Like This? (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:00:13 PM AEST
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Great effect this poem has on one's imagination not to mention one's nerves. A caldron of ambiguity all in the name of love, stirrs up lots of emotions. Great poem interesting and easy to read. nicely presented.


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