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Array ( [sid] => 131234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Remember Stone [time] => 2007-01-31 19:51:44 [hometext] => Co-write K.C. Vincent; and Crow [bodytext] => Remember hands
dust from the day,
nothing never un-fixible.

Fancy" frills,
daddys and little girls
the savage,
if they held my hand to long..

I remember the world was narrow"
and pointed at me,
the giant I stood behind.

Nights you were gone,
promises to sleep on,
"I have your favorite shirt,
you never could find.

I remember your passion
when lights burnt low,
trying to find love,
with the words you wrote.

I have found the Remember Stone"
wish you here,
I`am still that little girl ...

K.C. and Me..

[for every Father, and little girl] K.C. Vincent/ and me.

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Remember Stone

Contributed by crow on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 07:51:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Remember hands
dust from the day,
nothing never un-fixible.

Fancy" frills,
daddys and little girls
the savage,
if they held my hand to long..

I remember the world was narrow"
and pointed at me,
the giant I stood behind.

Nights you were gone,
promises to sleep on,
"I have your favorite shirt,
you never could find.

I remember your passion
when lights burnt low,
trying to find love,
with the words you wrote.

I have found the Remember Stone"
wish you here,
I`am still that little girl ...

K.C. and Me..

[for every Father, and little girl] K.C. Vincent/ and me.

Copyright © crow ... [ 2007-01-31 19:51:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Remember Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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lovely sentiments captured here, my friend. And so
softly comforting, the words ..

makes me feel a bit sad, somehow .. there are so
many that don't have the bond they should, or could.

This was beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. :)

~Breezy

Re: Remember Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:53:26 AM AEST
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This is beautiful glad it is back in full bloom, hee hee.

K you have great talent just like your dad, keep that pen singing it is a gift.

Love ya both
huggers

~Michelle~

Re: Remember Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 04:13:03 PM AEST
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Wonderful, heart touching piece of writing you two have come up with. *wink* Thanks for sharing this.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Remember Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 06:16:09 PM AEST
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A beautiful, moving and heartfelt write. May the beautiful bond you share as father & daughter never be broken my dear friend.
Your daughter is talented just like her dad. A beautiful touching poem thanks so much for sharing it with us~
love n hugs,
sue m

Re: Remember Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 11:11:51 PM AEST
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How incredibly precious...my own daughter & I, share the connectiveness & respect for each other as writers...this brings it all home for me, thank you!!!

Incredibly Precious!!!

BigLoveMuchPeace
~MisfitMe

Re: Remember Stone (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:59:43 PM AEST
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I imagine this piece as a conversation whispered between Father & Daughter on the dance floor at the reception. Beautiful embraces blurred by tears of love.

Bravo

Peace
Yangdantien

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