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Array ( [sid] => 131129 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untill We Meet Again [time] => 2007-01-29 10:33:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => calling out cries
upon the nights glowing moon
searching for the reasons
why you had left so soon

my minds drawing blanks
and my body lies still
paralized by the thought
of the love u had to kill

i have never found an answer
to the questions i had ask'd
and never will i know
so i must leave it in the past

but im stuck with these memories
with emotions so clear
i will futher myself from others
just to have u somewhere near

just talk to me please
let me get this off my chest
help me move on
its only for the best

how am i supposed to move on?
when u left me here to stray?
why cant u fix the problem?
nothings here to stay

but if u refuse this proposal
and the help that i ask'd
then make this the night
that this life will end at last

so please be true
to the next heart u see
dont let the troubles of love
cause another scene

so goodbye to you,
just pray for happiness to begin
but nothing last forever
just untill we meet again.... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => cooley1818 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Untill We Meet Again

Contributed by cooley1818 on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

calling out cries
upon the nights glowing moon
searching for the reasons
why you had left so soon

my minds drawing blanks
and my body lies still
paralized by the thought
of the love u had to kill

i have never found an answer
to the questions i had ask'd
and never will i know
so i must leave it in the past

but im stuck with these memories
with emotions so clear
i will futher myself from others
just to have u somewhere near

just talk to me please
let me get this off my chest
help me move on
its only for the best

how am i supposed to move on?
when u left me here to stray?
why cant u fix the problem?
nothings here to stay

but if u refuse this proposal
and the help that i ask'd
then make this the night
that this life will end at last

so please be true
to the next heart u see
dont let the troubles of love
cause another scene

so goodbye to you,
just pray for happiness to begin
but nothing last forever
just untill we meet again....

Copyright © cooley1818 ... [ 2007-01-29 10:33:20]
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Re: Untill We Meet Again (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:42:51 AM AEST
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this is a very expressive and emotional write on lost love.. I like how you worded that and the ending is very good.. sometimes people leave because they don't deal with problems and sometimes when they leave their isn't any problem and they are doing something wrong and have something hidden and they don't want to face the other person in the relationship or deal with a problem so they run away. very well written

vampyress Jenni

Re: Untill We Meet Again (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 01:36:19 PM AEST
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Really good emotional read
I can relate to this (which is not the best^^)
I really liked it, keep it up

Re: Untill We Meet Again (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:23:26 AM AEST
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I heard that good work..

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