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[aid] => mick
[title] => Farewell to Romance
[time] => 2007-01-29 08:43:23
[hometext] => So...I wrote something
[bodytext] => Your temple does not interest me
your god of caustic celluloid burning---
bubbling across the screen
The lines that once gripped
poured forth fluidly
as white wine from crystal
And I caught the weeping notes
in my cupped hands
their tinkling has faded now
In the shadow of
that merciful tree
lonely, silhouetted against the sky
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Farewell to Romance
Contributed by
stillstitch
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Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 08:43:23 AM in AEST
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Your temple does not interest me
your god of caustic celluloid burning---
bubbling across the screen
The lines that once gripped
poured forth fluidly
as white wine from crystal
And I caught the weeping notes
in my cupped hands
their tinkling has faded now
In the shadow of
that merciful tree
lonely, silhouetted against the sky
Copyright ©
stillstitch
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2007-01-29 08:43:23]
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:31:03 AM AEST
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very creative i really liked the flow.. good job
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 11:26:57 AM AEST
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How entirely this pulls at me.... pulling me, first, to your page with the thrill of seeing you post again... and then, pulling me away from the everything-else that had my attention just prior to reading the words found on this page. You, dear Stitchy, still impress me greatly and I do think always will.
What I love (as a reader) about this is that I can see it... I can see you in the moment that you've reflected here and and in the penning of this. 'Twas not a small moment nor a minor reflection, I'd guess. Farewells come of their own accord sometimes (bowing, perhaps, to Fate and Time's hands)... but not without impact ever. Our only option, then, is whether to pause and reflect upon them or to dart forward without pause - I frankly, prefer the later. And I do, most absolutely, find the expression of your pausing most admirable.
Well done, my friend. And yes (yes!), very nice to see you posting again.
~(Still) Snemmy : ) |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by Sagefairy on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 12:36:58 PM AEST
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| Well hello Stich! Good to see you here. This poem reminds me of "What Dreams May Come" and her tree with the purple blooms. It's a reflection of sadness, as it seems. Blessings, J. |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 01:56:16 PM AEST
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These are some extraordinary amazing paintings you draw in my mind
Thanks for sharing,
Thanks for the beautiful pictures |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 02:49:16 PM AEST
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Oh my!
Gosh I've missed your writing.
This...this descriptive, imaginative, even cryptic piece leads me down so many diffrent paths. It's both sad and nastolgic, like looking at the memory of regret and not being fazed by it.
Welcome back. I hope we see more of you soon. |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:10:23 AM AEST
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| I miss you, lady.... |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:30:25 AM AEST
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and good riddance...
What a well made piece. Great Job
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Farewell to Romance
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 10:21:16 PM AEST
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This was amazing. It pulled me in. This was a very creative and intresting poem. Great job.
Take care
Christina |
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