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Array ( [sid] => 131115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Entertaining Tragedy [time] => 2007-01-28 23:37:32 [hometext] => Some things I just don't understand... sometimes I hope I never will. [bodytext] => Life is one letter off of a lie,
Two word message, but you missed what’s inside.
Attack smart and make enemies fast,
Cruelty is the key to avenging the past.

So distorted, so messed up,
Forced a child’s mind wide shut.
Lost in pain, looking for escape,
Wrong way out, it’s too late.

Read the letter, didn’t understand,
How dare you call yourself a good man.
Don’t ponder for a second that it’s your fault,
Blame it on the girl with wounds full of salt.

Anger rages, you can’t control,
All the sense from you she stole.
But couldn’t use it, you broke inside,
Replaced logic with screwed up lies.

Tries to discern, talks it over in a little room
Cries her heart out, she’ll give up soon.
You’ll win and take your glory home,
It was all worth seeing the evil seed sown.

Muddled mind for the rest of her life,
See hatred in your grandchild’s eyes.
But you’ll never dare to realize,
You messed up big time. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Chamaron [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Entertaining Tragedy

Contributed by Chamaron on Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:37:32 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Life is one letter off of a lie,
Two word message, but you missed what’s inside.
Attack smart and make enemies fast,
Cruelty is the key to avenging the past.

So distorted, so messed up,
Forced a child’s mind wide shut.
Lost in pain, looking for escape,
Wrong way out, it’s too late.

Read the letter, didn’t understand,
How dare you call yourself a good man.
Don’t ponder for a second that it’s your fault,
Blame it on the girl with wounds full of salt.

Anger rages, you can’t control,
All the sense from you she stole.
But couldn’t use it, you broke inside,
Replaced logic with screwed up lies.

Tries to discern, talks it over in a little room
Cries her heart out, she’ll give up soon.
You’ll win and take your glory home,
It was all worth seeing the evil seed sown.

Muddled mind for the rest of her life,
See hatred in your grandchild’s eyes.
But you’ll never dare to realize,
You messed up big time.

Copyright Â© Chamaron ... [ 2007-01-28 23:37:32]
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Re: Entertaining Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:53:25 AM AEST
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This was a great poem. you have some really amazing lines in there. and i loved the ending. some people really do mess up, eh? i don't know exactly how you feel, but i understand.

great write.[=

-KB.

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