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The Lost
Contributed by
doug
on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 07:33:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The trees are thoughtful sadness
swaying in the deepest blue
The clouds are distant carelessness
with nothing left to do
The sun is a faded joy become a wistful
hue
The cool grass ; peacefulness beneath
the evening blue
The leaves are haunted restlessness
running past my feet
The wind is sweet forgetfulness and much
to my relief
sends a web of branched shadow blowing
'cross the lawn
and I in this mysterious skin ; the creator... the lover...
the lost.
Copyright ©
doug
... [
2007-01-28 19:33:12]
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Re: The Lost
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by musicXisXlife on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 11:20:06 PM AEST
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Ah! I don't really know what it means either..but I do in a way. It's really good, I know what you're getting at. Nice job.
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Re: The Lost
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by purplestary on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 05:58:37 AM AEST
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| i know what you mean.. i realy enjoyed this, it had great flow. being lost is a feeling that i'm sure many can relate to and understand, but your way of bringing that forward was unique and brilliant. nicely done. |
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Re: The Lost
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by True on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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| this has beautiful imagery, and a soft flowing feel to it. All in all, a very good poem. |
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Re: The Lost
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by endlesspath on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 10:15:48 PM AEST
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seems you have something inside begging to be let out for so many reasons. maybe not hurt, or pain,but finding something. good write.
smiles
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