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Mermaid on the Rocks
Contributed by
tejas9999
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Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:23:35 AM in AEST
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People are falling from life
Hurting themselves and others
Where has the lovely time gone?
When we lived like brothers
The heavens are polluted
The stars dont seem bright
We are destroying the Earth
Cant we stop this fight?
The lands are decaying
Oceans and lakes look so dry
Our Earth is dying
Even causing Gods to cry
Darwin proposed the evolution theory
Hell! We are on a route to De-evolution
Humans acting like monkeys
Killing precious nature by pollution
We people have to do something
Not just sit here and cry
Protest, fight or even kill
We should at least give it a try
But then who are asking for help
We are Humans for Gods sake
We wouldnt help a dying God
Cause everything under our skins fake
So she decided it was her job now
With a voice that could cure
She was the last Mermaid Angel
The only one here left pure
Sitting on the smooth sea-rocks
Her blue tail shimmering in the sunlight
Her milky-white wings flapping slowly
She was the most beautiful sight
There was a moment of serene silence
Everything went for a sudden time-out
The whole Universe came to a halt
Everyone waiting to see what was it about
She sang in her Healing Voice
Reaching to the very last particle of Earth
Everything from living to the non-living
Was having a miraculous Re-birth
An invisible army fought the evil
The song spreading love and joy
Earth was having a healing makeover
And arent we happy about it boy?
The lands were filled with green again
The oceans were crystal clear blue
The air was a fresh gift to breath
Hearts were being bound by the toughest glue
She cried as she sang the Healing
He wings flapping quickly in the pain
Her blue tail had turned bright red now
But her effort should not go in vain
She was loosing too much water
Wouldnt last till it was required
He body was drying up too fast
Her throat hurt and she was tired
She heard an underwater whistle
And suddenly knew it all
A killer- whale leaped into the air
And splashed the water with its fall
The effect of water was so rejuvenating
She sang with all her might
Every flower on the Earth blossomed
As her voice traveled at the speed of light
A fountain of water fell on the sea-rocks
As the whale exhaled through is blowhole
And people only thought about love then
From their hearts and their soul
A positive tremor was triggered
Sending a Peace ripple on Mankind
Men kneeled and prayed to God
For acting so selfish and being blind
The Mermaid Angel stopped singing
As she saw the blissful picture
Her goal had now been attained
As she had secured Earths future
A hundred rainbows in a descending line
And between them a setting Orange Sun
A group of dolphins leaping into the air
Now thats the Earths idea of fun
The Universe had started moving again
All its Galaxies traveling from West to East
Man had gone back to his routine now
But the Roman Gods were having a feast
The Earth was younger planet now
And it was ready to forgive
But man still was a selfish animal
He will hurt Earth till he would live
The Mermaid Angel wished for a Voice
That could cure the human brain
She was even ready to sing eternally
Until she would die from the pain
But God had made her a Mortal soul
She would be dead before any change
So she sat watching the sun sink in the ocean
The picture looked beautiful yet strange
- Tejas Thakker
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Re: Mermaid on the Rocks
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by inlovewithaladd on
Sunday, 28th January 2007 @ 12:30:01 AM AEST
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| This piece has beautiful moments, though there was a pretty head snapping transition in there and i feel like your rhyming was a bit forced, but all in all i felt this was worth the read. |
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