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[aid] => mick
[title] => Warrior Bard
[time] => 2007-01-15 23:58:29
[hometext] => A number of people might fit this description, but ...
[bodytext] => I saw this picture and thought instantly of Fionndruinne
this then, is for Andrew
Warrior Bard
Protector of the kingdoms
well renowned throughout the realm
with wisdom of the ages
sheltered ‘neath his battle helm
Although he is a warrior
he has a poet’s soul
his tongue, as sharp as any sword
he masterfully controls
He stands for truth and honor
moves with careful measured stride
and knows the fiercest battles fought
are waged on the inside
For the creature we call conscience
is never satisfied
when in hindsight we perceive
that loss and gain collide
With every war he’s ever won
another then, was lost
as only when the fight is gone
does one realize the cost
His honor and his duty
seem to temper what he dreams
yet in truth, I offer
only he knows what they mean
~ Nazmythian ~
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[ratings] => 15
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Warrior Bard
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Nazmythian
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Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 11:58:29 PM in AEST
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I saw this picture and thought instantly of Fionndruinne
this then, is for Andrew
Warrior Bard
Protector of the kingdoms
well renowned throughout the realm
with wisdom of the ages
sheltered ‘neath his battle helm
Although he is a warrior
he has a poet’s soul
his tongue, as sharp as any sword
he masterfully controls
He stands for truth and honor
moves with careful measured stride
and knows the fiercest battles fought
are waged on the inside
For the creature we call conscience
is never satisfied
when in hindsight we perceive
that loss and gain collide
With every war he’s ever won
another then, was lost
as only when the fight is gone
does one realize the cost
His honor and his duty
seem to temper what he dreams
yet in truth, I offer
only he knows what they mean
~ Nazmythian ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 12:06:07 AM AEST
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Oh Naz, this is so coool and soooo our Andrew...the second stanza really stood out for me. The whole piece is really a nice write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 12:21:17 AM AEST
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Exquisite...both atmospheric & meaningful...
I give this a resounding, " bravo "!
I simply loved this!
10 stars from ~MisfitMe |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 02:41:02 AM AEST
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Hi Naz,
I always love your work. You have a real talent. I wish
I had it. This poem is simply wonderful.
~Me~
P.S. a.k.a. J~ |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 07:19:09 AM AEST
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excellent
Shari |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:01:53 PM AEST
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| Fantastic write. The warrior Bard also a wonderful title. Loved it. Sue x |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:13:26 PM AEST
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wow awesome write and i love the flow of this one.. awesome job.. very creative and cool pic to go with it..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 01:36:49 PM AEST
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Power and majesty cheers to the bard and salute to the author.
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:04:20 PM AEST
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| your work always shows so much thought..great to see your work again. Been missing you my friend. ((((DM))) |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:21:43 PM AEST
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You always capture the moment with your writes my friend. I nice tribute as well.
I will not comment on the structure of the voice as it is always topnotch and without flaw. I hope you are well and the New Year is treating you great!
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 03:45:53 PM AEST
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A fine dedication from one talented poet to another. May your pen always flow so fluently with such wonderful masterpieces my friend. I'm so sorry I'm so behind on reading your work. A gem of a write. Well done Scott~
warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 16th January 2007 @ 04:18:48 PM AEST
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oh Nazzy this is sooo coool
i love this.I am sure Andrew will love it too.
hugs |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 03:07:12 AM AEST
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Good sir, I'm honored!
What are warriors without brothers in the fight? Keep it up, friend.
Andrew |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by EddieDean on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:07:40 PM AEST
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Its true, with every fight, with every battle, there is a cost. Win, lose or draw, there is a cost. And that cost is always dire. Few, oh so few, of us stand as warriors defending our beliefs and protecting our charges. Very good work my good sir, it touches my very soul.
mike |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by Sagefairy on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 05:04:46 PM AEST
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yeah from one of YPDC's "knights" to another - heh.
Very nice work, Nazzy. Good going!
Blessings, J. |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:38:46 AM AEST
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| A fitting write for a poet/ warrieir that is well deserved....written by someone with a pretty sharp tounge himself!!! |
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Re: Warrior Bard
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 04:23:37 PM AEST
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I love this poem, Scott. No one deserves it more than Andrew does. He's a great man.
Well done, my friend. You are also a great man.
*hugehugs to you both*
Phil xxx
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