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Array ( [sid] => 130578 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => your eyes kill [time] => 2007-01-15 22:23:48 [hometext] => plz comment [bodytext] => i lost my self in your eyes one to meany times
you sead thiat this will not die
were thay lies i cant decide
i cant let this kill me ill let your world fall apart

and now you left and
now im stearing at the celling
this pain is getting to much to bear
its not giveing me eany awences
ive lost now you have victory
im sick of all the fighting i hate you is still ecoing
in the walls of a borken hearted kid

for all the times that you could of left
why now not now
you walked out
amd put the world back on my shoulders

can you hear us breath tonight
dont hide the fact that u cant say good bye
i know
you fell for me
and befor we die
lets rember the times
befor it hit the floor
the time we know
what we were
the times we
lied on your floor
can you say good bye
walk out and say good night [comments] => 1 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 48 [informant] => egg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

your eyes kill

Contributed by egg on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:23:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i lost my self in your eyes one to meany times
you sead thiat this will not die
were thay lies i cant decide
i cant let this kill me ill let your world fall apart

and now you left and
now im stearing at the celling
this pain is getting to much to bear
its not giveing me eany awences
ive lost now you have victory
im sick of all the fighting i hate you is still ecoing
in the walls of a borken hearted kid

for all the times that you could of left
why now not now
you walked out
amd put the world back on my shoulders

can you hear us breath tonight
dont hide the fact that u cant say good bye
i know
you fell for me
and befor we die
lets rember the times
befor it hit the floor
the time we know
what we were
the times we
lied on your floor
can you say good bye
walk out and say good night

Copyright © egg ... [ 2007-01-15 22:23:48]
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Re: your eyes kill (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Monday, 15th January 2007 @ 10:41:47 PM AEST
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great write, really enjoyed it, could feel the emotions very strongly, keep it up.

Jenni xxoo

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