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Array ( [sid] => 130521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Love You [time] => 2007-01-14 18:56:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A part of you has grown so it’s a part of me,
And so you see,
It’s you and me together forever
And never ever apart, maybe in distance,
But never in heart.

If you’re asking if I need you,
The answer is forever.
If you’re asking if I’ll leave you,
The answer is never.
If you’re asking what I value,
The answer is you.
If you’re asking if I love you,
The answer is always, I do.

I’ll always be beside you
Until the very end.
Wiping all your tears away,
Being your best friend.
I’ll smile when you smile,
And feel the same pain as you.
And if you cry a single tear,
I promise I’ll cry too.

All I ever wanted was someone to
Wrap their arms around me for no reason at all
To kiss me on the forehead just because he wants to
Hold my hand because he doesn’t want to ever let it go.
I think after all this time I have finally found that someone.
Its you and I couldn’t be happier. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Munchkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Love You

Contributed by Munchkin on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 06:56:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

A part of you has grown so it’s a part of me,
And so you see,
It’s you and me together forever
And never ever apart, maybe in distance,
But never in heart.

If you’re asking if I need you,
The answer is forever.
If you’re asking if I’ll leave you,
The answer is never.
If you’re asking what I value,
The answer is you.
If you’re asking if I love you,
The answer is always, I do.

I’ll always be beside you
Until the very end.
Wiping all your tears away,
Being your best friend.
I’ll smile when you smile,
And feel the same pain as you.
And if you cry a single tear,
I promise I’ll cry too.

All I ever wanted was someone to
Wrap their arms around me for no reason at all
To kiss me on the forehead just because he wants to
Hold my hand because he doesn’t want to ever let it go.
I think after all this time I have finally found that someone.
Its you and I couldn’t be happier.

Copyright Â© Munchkin ... [ 2007-01-14 18:56:49]
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Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:21:45 PM AEST
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I liked this alot, very nice :). The person you're describing sort of reminds me of the kind of person I used to be hehe, have a good day! ciao

Re: I Love You (User Rating: 1 )
by amateurwriter on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:33:16 PM AEST
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although we all write for oureselves and not anyone else, there's always room for a little criticism. So here's my "little criticism" to you: I think your poem articulates your feelings too well... it is too obvious, almost a cliche. I think a good poem must be abstract to some level, and leave some space for the reader to absorb on its own. Yours doesn't... it's all too clear...

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