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Array ( [sid] => 130498 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Letters [time] => 2007-01-13 23:18:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Silhouettes of the past
lost in minutes
reading yesterdays.

Visit the corner,
dreams and memories
like discarded wrappers.

So fragile the layers
golden rules,
here in the den of
dues, and do not.

Smile at my leisure,
I forget your not there,
unguarded heart,
messages sent,
vacant names.

I`ll never stop,
silly me,
dry the eyes
the bell tolls.

Missing
with gain,
missing
with fall
Just let me lay here
thoughts are like wine..
letters of sorrow..
© Copyright 2006 Vincent
[comments] => 11 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Letters

Contributed by crow on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:18:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Silhouettes of the past
lost in minutes
reading yesterdays.

Visit the corner,
dreams and memories
like discarded wrappers.

So fragile the layers
golden rules,
here in the den of
dues, and do not.

Smile at my leisure,
I forget your not there,
unguarded heart,
messages sent,
vacant names.

I`ll never stop,
silly me,
dry the eyes
the bell tolls.

Missing
with gain,
missing
with fall
Just let me lay here
thoughts are like wine..
letters of sorrow..
© Copyright 2006 Vincent

Copyright Â© crow ... [ 2007-01-13 23:18:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:21:17 PM AEST
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Oh.....
this is moving my friend. Emotions run deep within this one.

hugsssss
~Michelle~

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 11:46:51 PM AEST
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Really excellent rhythm...

I sipped upon:

"...thoughts are like wine..."

Wisdom wafts from each read.

Peace
Yangdantien

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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brought forth many emotions...well written

Shari

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 06:35:25 PM AEST
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An emotionally powered write that tugs at the heart strings. You have written this well.
Well done and thanks for sharing it with us.
warm hugs,
sue m

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 09:28:38 PM AEST
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"dreams and memories
like discarded wrappers."

Kind of reminds me of a poem about popcorn left on a theatre floor.. kind of.

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 02:22:06 PM AEST
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Just take the better path to that heart that has been turmoiled, and make it known it can get better......Such sentiment in this write.....I hope it gets better and happiness will prevail.

Brew~

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 07:34:29 AM AEST
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Loved reading this. It flowed from stanzas similar to Haikus into longer stanzas that makes it seem like a flowing river.

Ace
Nathan

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 02:50:11 AM AEST
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very moving write

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd January 2007 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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This style of seemilngly chopped lines here really lends to the impact of emotions. A very powerful piece you have here!!

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 18th April 2007 @ 02:31:29 PM AEST
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beautiful:)

love n' hugs nessa

Re: Letters (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 11:17:04 AM AEST
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OH wow, vincent. You painted a picture in my mind . . .

I could see a person, kneeling in a dim attic, lit only by
a small stretch of sunlight cascading through a dormer
window . . .letters in their hand and a single tear rolling
down one cheek. Obviously flooded by memory . . .

exceptional. Beautiful and wondrous and soooooo very emotive.

~Breezy

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