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A WORK OF ART
Contributed by
HoneyCat
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Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 05:48:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a work of art
A symphony
Performed by all
To the cadence of the universe
Filled and dappled
With color and form
Or nothing at all
When a pause is its very state of being
Life is a wonderful dance
Adlibbed in its form
Its stage intertwined
Creating a backdrop
Refreshed in its will
Bowing anew before its grand finale
As the great curtain falls
Life is a birthright
As is death
It is the realization of change
In itself a truly beautiful thing
Copyright ©
HoneyCat
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2007-01-13 17:48:42]
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Re: A WORK OF ART
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by greyshadow on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 07:07:52 PM AEST
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Short, concise, and simply enjoyable.
Great Work! I wish I could say as much in such few words. |
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Re: A WORK OF ART
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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I really like this it is lyrical and delivers a key perspective.
Thank You
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: A WORK OF ART
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by Alex23 on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 12:55:11 AM AEST
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| I likes this one. It flowed nicely, and reminds me of what a joy it is to be alive and breathing. Great job! |
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