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He comes at night
Contributed by
heba48
on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 11:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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He comes at night
In the darkest nights
Enters your room
You hear his steps
But you cant move
You can see his scary face
But you cant scream
In your bed you are frozen
You can feel his hand on your body
Slipping it under your shirt
You can feel his heavy breath
Hot hot
Like a wild dragon breathing out fire
You can smell his sweat
When his body is next to you
You can hear your heartbeats
You are screaming
But no voice is coming out
You are running
But your legs are like jelly
You want to wake up from this nightmare
But you cant
Because its a reality
And you cant escape
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heba48
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Re: He comes at night
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 11:31:59 AM AEST
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Very intense write. My interpretation...is a horrible view....of a child being molested. Maybe I am wrong here. Good write to evoke such feelings of terror, sadness and outrage.
Much peace,
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Re: He comes at night
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by Crow on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 12:19:08 PM AEST
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| I agree, this is pointed, and can be a terrible ordeal. truth is..goes right to a heart. Crow |
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Re: He comes at night
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th January 2007 @ 07:11:06 PM AEST
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Well I agree with deadhead, that's what I see too.
It's a terrible fact that is very painfull to live as I can relate.
Great writing.
Hang tuff friend, and I'm hear if ya need to rattle just p.m. me.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: He comes at night
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by RunawayAngel on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
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| very sad but a good write |
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