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Scarlet Roses
Contributed by
Channing
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Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 09:19:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Scarlet
Such a beautiful color
So dark and brooding
Yet full of life
Its such a cold color
But at the same time
Feels so brilliantly warm,
Just the way it felt
As it trickled down
Your soft pale skin
My, does it accent your features
You being bathed in your scarlet color
And your neck,
Such a lovely fountain
Sorry I had to let it flow
But I just needed to see
Scarlet
From you my elegant rose
And now that your fountain has dried
Your scarlet gone cold
I must move on
To another elegant rose
Im sorry I must leave you behind
For I do so love you
But my need is much too strong
So farewell and goodnight
My sweet, sweet scarlet rose
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2007-01-05 09:19:42]
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Re: Scarlet Roses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th January 2007 @ 08:04:35 PM AEST
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| This was a very good poem. I enjoyed it |
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Re: Scarlet Roses
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 10:18:31 PM AEST
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This is quite lovely, a most beautiful tale and well presented peice of poetry. You know your craft well.
thanks for the comment also.
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