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Array ( [sid] => 130033 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => so far gone [time] => 2007-01-01 23:08:24 [hometext] => this is the first poem that I've submitted, I was angry and I just put a bunch of words that I had written down together so it's a little choppy but thats why I liked it! please leave your comments so I can see how I did for my first time! [bodytext] => everything falling so fast
everyday something new
try to take it in
drag me under with this pain
I need a cure
thoughts of you so far away
whats best for me is nothing unsure
emptiness fills the mirror
looking for that past reflection
not like you were
losing everything, lost inside
torn, hurt, sick, numb
turning to stone as you stare off
coldness fills, runs through my veins
trapped inside and nobody cares
fading slowly, I need you...
the bottle almost gone, forget pain
anger, darkness, silence
are you happy that you changed? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 6 [informant] => brokensky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

so far gone

Contributed by brokensky on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 11:08:24 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

everything falling so fast
everyday something new
try to take it in
drag me under with this pain
I need a cure
thoughts of you so far away
whats best for me is nothing unsure
emptiness fills the mirror
looking for that past reflection
not like you were
losing everything, lost inside
torn, hurt, sick, numb
turning to stone as you stare off
coldness fills, runs through my veins
trapped inside and nobody cares
fading slowly, I need you...
the bottle almost gone, forget pain
anger, darkness, silence
are you happy that you changed?

Copyright © brokensky ... [ 2007-01-01 23:08:24]
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Re: so far gone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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Raw honest emotion I like it.
~Michelle~

Re: so far gone (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 2nd January 2007 @ 02:49:59 PM AEST
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I really like this piece.. its very straightfoward with anger and confusion.. reminds me of a few times i wrote when angry.. good job.. this is the best way to vent anger.. some of the best pieces come from being angry at the moment.. great expression!

vampyress Jenni

Re: so far gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 11:29:38 AM AEST
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Good write fer the first time :-)
Welcome look forward to more of your writes

Whisper

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