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Understood in the wrong way
Wasting my life every day

The years peel back
Covering their mysterious center
Smaller as we go

Watching the world from the outside
Tripping over others
Crawling for a better view

Hoping for footprints to erase in the wind
Hoping to start again
Find my own tracks to follow

Beauty surrounds me
Too bright to notice
This place will make you blind

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This Place Will Make You Blind

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 03:32:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm incredible in my own way
Understood in the wrong way
Wasting my life every day

The years peel back
Covering their mysterious center
Smaller as we go

Watching the world from the outside
Tripping over others
Crawling for a better view

Hoping for footprints to erase in the wind
Hoping to start again
Find my own tracks to follow

Beauty surrounds me
Too bright to notice
This place will make you blind

And I wonder where I will go

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2007-01-01 03:32:11]
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Re: This Place Will Make You Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:07:20 AM AEST
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this is a Bad-ass write..I really enjoyed this..Crow

Re: This Place Will Make You Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 03:39:50 PM AEST
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I must agree this rocked..... you will find your own way.....

~Michelle~

Re: This Place Will Make You Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 04:04:05 PM AEST
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Yes well said, and we all feel like this sometime.Sue x

Re: This Place Will Make You Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:00:00 PM AEST
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This is beautiful..Well written..
Excellent...
honey56
Happy New Year!

Re: This Place Will Make You Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 07:34:37 PM AEST
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I agree with all above,
this is a awesome flow.

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