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[sid] => 129986
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Untitled (suggestions welcome)
[time] => 2006-12-31 04:24:53
[hometext] => first poem like this i have writen. please, help me out. i want to become a better writer. :)
[bodytext] => Think about who you are Is this where you want to be? Or did you mess* up? Maybe, just maybe, it doesn’t matter It never has Inspiration has come There is something in the air Or maybe you’ve left You’ve overdosed on life, you are no more Not anymore So, do not worry You will never feel again Is this what you want? This may not feel bad, but it won’t feel good Ever again Forget about it The hope that comes with this life Is spoiled; it’s gone But you shouldn’t worry, you don’t feel this So, be at peace *-supposed to be another four letter word. haha. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 43 [informant] => idkwhatimdoing5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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