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Array ( [sid] => 129919 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Miss Second Best [time] => 2006-12-29 09:08:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => so call me a quitter,

i don't rly care.

going between us two,

you really think that's fair.?

so what, i'm back-up.?

that's it, we're done.?

you're pulling the trigger on this gun.?

since when was it only you,

what happened to "i'm over her.".?

my thoughts a scramble, i can't think straight.

everything around me's just a blur.

so i guess i'll move on,

it wasn't that important or fun.

so just pull the trigger, aim right here.

end it all with the shot of a gun.

i can't stand to watch you,

fall back, and get hurt.

but i can't change your mind,

can't heal the pain under you're shirt.

so tell me why did you bother.?

i just wasted you're time.

to your face i'll say i will be,

but i'll never be fine.

but that doesn't matter,

pick up and get going.

will i secretly still love you,

without anyone knowing.?

i don't think so,

not after this.

there isn't one thing,

i will truly miss.

cause it hurt so bad,

to be miss second best.

to have my heart so willingly,

ripped out of my chest.

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Miss Second Best

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:08:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

so call me a quitter,

i don't rly care.

going between us two,

you really think that's fair.?

so what, i'm back-up.?

that's it, we're done.?

you're pulling the trigger on this gun.?

since when was it only you,

what happened to "i'm over her.".?

my thoughts a scramble, i can't think straight.

everything around me's just a blur.

so i guess i'll move on,

it wasn't that important or fun.

so just pull the trigger, aim right here.

end it all with the shot of a gun.

i can't stand to watch you,

fall back, and get hurt.

but i can't change your mind,

can't heal the pain under you're shirt.

so tell me why did you bother.?

i just wasted you're time.

to your face i'll say i will be,

but i'll never be fine.

but that doesn't matter,

pick up and get going.

will i secretly still love you,

without anyone knowing.?

i don't think so,

not after this.

there isn't one thing,

i will truly miss.

cause it hurt so bad,

to be miss second best.

to have my heart so willingly,

ripped out of my chest.

<2

Copyright © xDiSaStErPiEcEx ... [ 2006-12-29 09:08:50]
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Re: Miss Second Best (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 09:56:17 AM AEST
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your pain is evident in this moving write...but believe it or not you will learn from this and the heart does heal

NS

Re: Miss Second Best (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 01:27:26 AM AEST
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Nothing worse than the that feeling and the hurt it leaves in your heart. It doesn't make you second best it only makes the offending party a first class jackass not to mention a huge poop. You will hurt for awhile but will later come to see that there is someone worthy of you. Good strong write.

Michelle

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