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Array ( [sid] => 129673 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loneliness Follows [time] => 2006-12-21 19:21:45 [hometext] => I did not believe in Love at first sight until the night I meet Tiffany at a friends party. Unfortunately, feelings of guilt for her ex drove us apart. Love would never bloom, but I will cherish the brief time we spent together. I'll never forget it. [bodytext] => Loneliness Follows

She entered the room like an angle from Heaven
Her beauty and aura mirrored a goddess impression
My soul was eclipsed, my heart was divided
Intentions unclear, but thoroughly invited

Trapped by her spell, my passion provoked
Feelings of love remained cleverly cloaked
Our eyes joined like pieces of a magical puzzle
An eternal stare even time couldn’t muzzle

Anxiously intrigued, I gathered my thoughts
What would I say? My stomach in knots
Her warm glowing smile had found its way in
Easing my tension, I gave her a grin

Alone in the darkness, we meet with a kiss
Pleasure unbound in a web of sweet bliss
Lips soft like roses, wild and pure
Gathered from gardens of mystical lure

To venture further, you must pass a test
Are your intentions to play like the rest?
Holding her closely, I pondered this label
If love was a game, my cards on your table

She playfully teased as we made our escape
Her hair woven silk in amber wine grape
Our bodies embraced, drenched under midsummer skies
Love's symphony played as stars danced in her eyes

The moon went to rest and the sun had awaken
I borrowed the time of a love that was taken
Was I playing the fool? Is it all an illusion?
Bad timing had caused this painful conclusion

She gazed at me softly, her eyes full of tears
You stole my heart, but he has my years
I cant watch him suffer, I feel so much guilt
Please understand, its not how I'm built

I'm sorry my love, but I just cannot stay
I'll dream of you often, and wait for the day
If not in this lifetime, then surely you'll see
Fate sealed my heart closed, only you have the key






































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Loneliness Follows

Contributed by NOT_THAT_GUY on Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 07:21:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Loneliness Follows

She entered the room like an angle from Heaven
Her beauty and aura mirrored a goddess impression
My soul was eclipsed, my heart was divided
Intentions unclear, but thoroughly invited

Trapped by her spell, my passion provoked
Feelings of love remained cleverly cloaked
Our eyes joined like pieces of a magical puzzle
An eternal stare even time couldn’t muzzle

Anxiously intrigued, I gathered my thoughts
What would I say? My stomach in knots
Her warm glowing smile had found its way in
Easing my tension, I gave her a grin

Alone in the darkness, we meet with a kiss
Pleasure unbound in a web of sweet bliss
Lips soft like roses, wild and pure
Gathered from gardens of mystical lure

To venture further, you must pass a test
Are your intentions to play like the rest?
Holding her closely, I pondered this label
If love was a game, my cards on your table

She playfully teased as we made our escape
Her hair woven silk in amber wine grape
Our bodies embraced, drenched under midsummer skies
Love's symphony played as stars danced in her eyes

The moon went to rest and the sun had awaken
I borrowed the time of a love that was taken
Was I playing the fool? Is it all an illusion?
Bad timing had caused this painful conclusion

She gazed at me softly, her eyes full of tears
You stole my heart, but he has my years
I cant watch him suffer, I feel so much guilt
Please understand, its not how I'm built

I'm sorry my love, but I just cannot stay
I'll dream of you often, and wait for the day
If not in this lifetime, then surely you'll see
Fate sealed my heart closed, only you have the key










































Copyright © NOT_THAT_GUY ... [ 2006-12-21 19:21:45]
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Re: Loneliness Follows (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 08:42:37 AM AEST
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This was amazing... I loved this poem.. It made me sad... But love has its moments to do that... Great poem... I am sorry that it had come down to that...

Take care
Merry Christmas
Christina


Re: Loneliness Follows (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen_unknown_to_myself on Sunday, 24th December 2006 @ 02:00:50 AM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes as I know only too well what its like (even tho i am a chic lol) I'm sorry you went through that. It's a great poem it's what I could never put to words. I love it and hopefully she'll come back to u.

Unknown to myself
Jen




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