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Her
Contributed by
Demoncraze
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Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 06:11:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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HER
The beating of her heart
The power of her soul
The warmth from within
All can be seen in her eyes
You stare into them
You see the glow
You see the hope
You know theres something special there, but never knowing what
When she smiles you see the shine
You look closely
Trying to find
Trying to find love
When she laughs you smile
When she laughs you want to be there
Be there to share the moment
Be there to be one that makes her happy
You crave to hug her
To hold her
To be her one
To feel her bodily warmth
All night you dream of the touch
Dreams of feelings her there with you
Making your body ache
Wishing you were there, next to her, holding her
The day full of nothing but thoughts of her
Wishing she would walk around the corner
Come face to face
And for the first time meet the one
The one you long for
The one youve dreamed of
The one you miss
The one you want
The One You Love
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Re: Her
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by Clarity_Rising on
Wednesday, 20th December 2006 @ 09:58:42 PM AEST
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| Your poem is very sad and heartrending, and unfortunately I can relate… Great write, it’s very beautiful. |
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Re: Her
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by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 21st December 2006 @ 01:51:44 PM AEST
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You use free form well, a very touching, beautiful write. Know how you feel...
May this be the first of many posts here!
2sdy xxx |
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