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Swimming under pressure
Contributed by
Teusday-Moon
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Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 06:24:58 AM in AEST
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Are you ready to break down
Emit pain without sound
But your mind is raging
Insides are decaying
Tender hearts bust out of chests
Limbs fail when needed most
Call off all your bets
He is winning, he is winning
Forgive me, he is winning
Under pressure you explode
Emotions crashing into walls
Blood spills to the floor
And you cant bear it anymore
Trashing through the river
Swearing at the sky
Lungs drown with water
Sinking to the bottom
Surely you will die
Under pressure you explode
Emotions crashing into walls
Blood spills to the floor
And you cant bear it anymore
Under pressure you explode
Emotions crashing into walls
Blood spills to the floor
And you cant bear it anymore
Theyre searching
For the body
Theyre searching
For the letter
Final explanation of departure
You thought you could live underwater
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Re: Swimming under pressure
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by yangdantien on
Saturday, 16th December 2006 @ 09:32:45 AM AEST
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This piece is a rock song rolled up into a firecracker that goes off in my head. I love the last line:
"...Final explanation of departure
You thought you could live underwater"
Totally out of sequence yet gives this piece much wider scope.
Good Job
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