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[aid] => mick
[title] => Violent Insanity
[time] => 2006-12-16 05:13:10
[hometext] => ...I don't personally think this is a whiney emo-child poem, so please don't let the title fool you... but I know it needs some revision, and suggestions would be appreciated. :)
[bodytext] => Silenced screams plea for escape Hushed upon her lips in vain Every quiver another word To piece together her phrases Things she couldn't say Couldn't find the words to tell it Or wouldn't Out of fear and doubt Unspoken words stream down her face She tries to collect her thoughts Every wet spot another word To piece together her phrases Things she couldn't say Couldn't find the words to tell it Or wouldn't Out of fear and doubt Somewhere there's a letter Written in pieces Fragmented as her heart Literary imagery Painted in black and white A mural of decietful strokes Such as the way she saw Memories poured onto paper As thin as the line she walked Tucked beneath her pillow Stashed near the brandy and the pills Folded with his picture She keeps a secret hidden To remind her of the night Her violent insanity swayed And of all the words she bled for him For she lacked the confidence to speak them [comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 43 [informant] => satanssecret1369 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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