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Today when you were sitting with me
the pit of me started to moan
because all your troubles
mirrored my own
exactly.

I wanted to tell you : the
suffer you feel, I feel it too.
We're both tortured with the same knife.

But I didn't say anything.

and those pills you take....

I don't know if you notice it :
we're so similar,
but still unique!
Just the two of us.
Why can't you see this?

I can feel your hand on my back.

Dreams aren't enough

Illusions don't satisfy me enough.... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 33 [informant] => sally-heart-jack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

He's Charmingly Antisocial.

Contributed by sally-heart-jack on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 10:36:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Our names stick, our combos click.

Today when you were sitting with me
the pit of me started to moan
because all your troubles
mirrored my own
exactly.

I wanted to tell you : the
suffer you feel, I feel it too.
We're both tortured with the same knife.

But I didn't say anything.

and those pills you take....

I don't know if you notice it :
we're so similar,
but still unique!
Just the two of us.
Why can't you see this?

I can feel your hand on my back.

Dreams aren't enough

Illusions don't satisfy me enough....

Copyright © sally-heart-jack ... [ 2006-12-13 22:36:52]
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Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 11:05:18 PM AEST
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You have something good here. I like the style and your message is clear and heartfelt....I hope he sees it.

Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial. (User Rating: 1 )
by decibel on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 04:15:51 AM AEST
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been there ;

Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial. (User Rating: 1 )
by decibel on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 04:17:36 AM AEST
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been there ;

Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 10:53:59 PM AEST
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awww! wow....he will come....if you guys are truly this similar..adn the dream is there...teh illusion will become a reality...someday

lovign teh rhymes!
:-)
ashley

Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial. (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 19th December 2006 @ 06:32:11 PM AEST
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This is a great piece!
The girl I broke up with a while ago just came back into my life - saying quite a similar thing about us. It's strange when isolated ppl find someone with whom they just click - something they cannot help - it's just something they feel.
I like the style of this piece and the title is great! You're right; with such a person, illusions don't satisfy.
Great write!

- Tim

Re: He's Charmingly Antisocial. (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 26th May 2007 @ 02:25:43 AM AEST
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i love your style here, ...sometimes you need to jump out there? give a lill kiss? now youll have to write one and let us all know what happened,

love n' hugs nessa

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