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Array ( [sid] => 129378 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Confused Boy [time] => 2006-12-13 18:25:44 [hometext] => If you know the history of F. Scott Fitzgerald, you'll understand this piece. [bodytext] => I don’t want my own Zelda
Fitzgerald’s foolish game
while I understand his heart
I sure don’t want the same

I want a heart
I long for art
not some twisted law
I just want life to start

My quarter life crisis
so much time I waste
pursuing a hopeless dream
when love’s all I want to taste

Summer’s on it’s way
plants wilt more each day
friends refuse to wake
no-one’s got anything to say

Here stands a confused boy
bottled thoughts I can’t share
giving all the love I have
just asking for what’s fair

No, I want no Zelda
but I’ve already held her
I’m just a lost lover
with Fitzgerald as my elder.

13/12/06 [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 21 [informant] => one-curly-fry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Confused Boy

Contributed by one-curly-fry on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 06:25:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I don’t want my own Zelda
Fitzgerald’s foolish game
while I understand his heart
I sure don’t want the same

I want a heart
I long for art
not some twisted law
I just want life to start

My quarter life crisis
so much time I waste
pursuing a hopeless dream
when love’s all I want to taste

Summer’s on it’s way
plants wilt more each day
friends refuse to wake
no-one’s got anything to say

Here stands a confused boy
bottled thoughts I can’t share
giving all the love I have
just asking for what’s fair

No, I want no Zelda
but I’ve already held her
I’m just a lost lover
with Fitzgerald as my elder.

13/12/06

Copyright Â© one-curly-fry ... [ 2006-12-13 18:25:44]
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Re: Confused Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 14th December 2006 @ 12:23:43 AM AEST
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Very deep and emotional but sad and I love the way you use Fitzgerald to explain what’s going on. Wonderful, wonderful, I like everything about this write, and the more I read it the more I understand and like it!

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