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Array ( [sid] => 129257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How I feel about Us [time] => 2006-12-10 23:00:39 [hometext] => Love turned to hate [bodytext] => You come around, my knees get weak
You talk to me it’s hard to speak.
You look at me and I just melt.
Well that’s how it once felt.

Now you come around I want to leave
You speak to me I want to scream
You look at me and I want to cry
Well because of you I want to die,

Use me, abuse me, play with my mind
If that were a crime you’d be doing hard time.
Lie to me, cheat on me, let me fail
If this were a sin you’d go straight to hell

Three weeks ago I loved you some much
now it seems you didn’t love me enough.
Talk to me tell me what’s wrong
Don’t treat us like some tragic love song.

Frustration is igniting into this immense flame
All of these problems and I’m the one to blame?
Why do I stay why don’t I leave?
I guess because of the hold you have on me.

You come around me knees get week
You come around I want to run
But I stay and act like it’s ok.
Well it’s not and today’s my last day

I’m done. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 48 [informant] => jtkzlimz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
How I feel about Us

Contributed by jtkzlimz on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 11:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You come around, my knees get weak
You talk to me it’s hard to speak.
You look at me and I just melt.
Well that’s how it once felt.

Now you come around I want to leave
You speak to me I want to scream
You look at me and I want to cry
Well because of you I want to die,

Use me, abuse me, play with my mind
If that were a crime you’d be doing hard time.
Lie to me, cheat on me, let me fail
If this were a sin you’d go straight to hell

Three weeks ago I loved you some much
now it seems you didn’t love me enough.
Talk to me tell me what’s wrong
Don’t treat us like some tragic love song.

Frustration is igniting into this immense flame
All of these problems and I’m the one to blame?
Why do I stay why don’t I leave?
I guess because of the hold you have on me.

You come around me knees get week
You come around I want to run
But I stay and act like it’s ok.
Well it’s not and today’s my last day

I’m done.




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Re: How I feel about Us (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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Sad but very strong, convincing, write.
huggs,
emy


Re: How I feel about Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Mila on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 02:17:08 AM AEST
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I realy like your piece & how is written.


Re: How I feel about Us (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 10:42:18 AM AEST
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wow very sad and powerful write.. awesome flow to it and i must say.. im glad that you can walk away from soemone who mistreats you.. thereis hope to find better trust me.. awesome write though

JENNI




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