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Array ( [sid] => 12923 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fool No More [time] => 2003-02-19 07:00:00 [hometext] => Just a thought [bodytext] => How long does it take for all of this to end?
When are you going to realize
I was just trying to be a friend.
Many nights I lay awake
Wondering what is going to happen
because of this mistake.
I would have been there for you
then I realized that the
last of our friendship is through.
What a fool was I
for relying on false words
you told by and by.
I shouldn't be threatened by the cold words you speak
It was your help
I tried to seek.
Good bye to the friendship we had
Too bad that you had to be
my childrens dad. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 48 [informant] => mckayla [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Fool No More

Contributed by mckayla on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How long does it take for all of this to end?
When are you going to realize
I was just trying to be a friend.
Many nights I lay awake
Wondering what is going to happen
because of this mistake.
I would have been there for you
then I realized that the
last of our friendship is through.
What a fool was I
for relying on false words
you told by and by.
I shouldn't be threatened by the cold words you speak
It was your help
I tried to seek.
Good bye to the friendship we had
Too bad that you had to be
my childrens dad.

Copyright © mckayla ... [ 2003-02-19 07:00:00]
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Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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very painful and sad, love the children he gave you, great write

Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 02:34:41 PM AEST
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Ouch!!! This must hurt... it is a lovely write..even tho it is so sad...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 11:53:54 AM AEST
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i like this one, but it is sad. but i like the way you expressed the pain. thanks for sharing!

Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:35:44 PM AEST
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Wow I liked this as well as the surprise ending. I too have lay there at nite and realized some 'friendships' just weren't worth it. Great poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:05:14 PM AEST
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the hurt jumps out when i read this
awesome write
if you feel this as you write like i do ..then thank you so much for sharing it ..i hope it healed you a little after you wrote it

peace be your journey
Terry

Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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This speaks volumes. I have a friend who lives these words as well. Nice write.

Re: Fool No More (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:25:42 AM AEST
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I like the way you change the rhyming structure to reinforce your points, had ,bad, dad. great poem

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