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Array ( [sid] => 129210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A present in the form of unforgettable words [time] => 2006-12-09 15:25:02 [hometext] => This is the first poem i've written for a very very very long time. please tell me what u think. Thank you [bodytext] => I've lived my life so far
In the fastlane of nothingness
I made terrible decisions
Did some very wrong things
Regretted half of my life.
Until now.


I was looking for love
In all of the wrong places
Just the way it always goes
When the person I needed the most
Was right infront of me all along

He's made my life better
more enjoyable
But most of all
He's made me remember
What happiness is supposed to be


I feel as if i've loved him before
Because loving him came so easily for me
He makes me feel like a princess
No,like a Queen
He takes away all of my fears.
Allows me to cry
but then wipes away my tears
and makes the world seem right again
he surprises me every day
with some small gesture of his love.


He doesn't need to tell me that he loves me.
Because he shows me all the time.
I love him.
I love him more then he knows.
this is my present to him.
I love you baby.
Thank you for everything that you've done for me.
Because even the small things matter.
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A present in the form of unforgettable words

Contributed by Kirby on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 03:25:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I've lived my life so far
In the fastlane of nothingness
I made terrible decisions
Did some very wrong things
Regretted half of my life.
Until now.


I was looking for love
In all of the wrong places
Just the way it always goes
When the person I needed the most
Was right infront of me all along

He's made my life better
more enjoyable
But most of all
He's made me remember
What happiness is supposed to be


I feel as if i've loved him before
Because loving him came so easily for me
He makes me feel like a princess
No,like a Queen
He takes away all of my fears.
Allows me to cry
but then wipes away my tears
and makes the world seem right again
he surprises me every day
with some small gesture of his love.


He doesn't need to tell me that he loves me.
Because he shows me all the time.
I love him.
I love him more then he knows.
this is my present to him.
I love you baby.
Thank you for everything that you've done for me.
Because even the small things matter.




Copyright © Kirby ... [ 2006-12-09 15:25:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A present in the form of unforgettable words (User Rating: 1 )
by JoeyTrib1550 on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 03:47:37 PM AEST
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Great emotional write, you can really feel your love in this
He must be a very lucky person indeed
Great Job, keep it up

with much love and regret, for they can't be seperated,
Marc


Re: A present in the form of unforgettable words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th April 2007 @ 02:05:17 AM AEST
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wow. What a beautiful thing you have done here.
This is such a lovely write, dedication, thank you
and "present ". I'm sure your love must have been
so touched by it. It is so softly moving.

wonderful post ..

~Breezy


Re: A present in the form of unforgettable words (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 03:51:16 AM AEST
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A poem can be the greatest and most memorable present to someone you love. My girlfriend gives me these presents all of the time and they come more frequently than I deserve, but they are indeed the greatest physical gifts because they drip with emotion. This poem drips with emotion and is simply romantic.

I feel as if i've loved him before
Because loving him came so easily for me


I loved that line!

BRAVO!

SCM




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