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[aid] => mick
[title] => And Your Thoughts
[time] => 2006-12-05 23:57:54
[hometext] => I kinda just wrote whatever came into my head, so it might be a little odd. Critique would be helpful.
[bodytext] => View from above you're a snowflake falling, floating slowly downwards you see her happy, laughing spinning and twirling hair and skirt out like umbrellas like in slow motion... Step by step. Around and around. getting closer you see the sparkle in her eyes excitement in her laugh happiness in her movements And your thoughts you used to be like that excited for each day a reason to wake up ...before. Now not driven no purpose alone...lonely. Getting closer, nostalgia seeps into you taking over sadness pain thoughts, memories and then Black. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 73 [informant] => musicXisXlife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )
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