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Array ( [sid] => 129075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => arise with HOPE [time] => 2006-12-05 19:12:42 [hometext] => this one is for everyone who may lose hope.. don't give up [bodytext] => One day when you awake
your heart will no longer ache
the feeling of fear will be farther.. not near
the sound of hope will echo within
the chains of dismay willfade and break away
you will fly free from pains embrace
no longer will tears cover your face

And the angels will cover you with
protective wings
the pain will die
and your spirit will rise... rise to completion

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arise with HOPE

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 07:12:42 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

One day when you awake
your heart will no longer ache
the feeling of fear will be farther.. not near
the sound of hope will echo within
the chains of dismay willfade and break away
you will fly free from pains embrace
no longer will tears cover your face

And the angels will cover you with
protective wings
the pain will die
and your spirit will rise... rise to completion

JENNI

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Re: arise with HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by dh_guitarist on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 07:35:39 PM AEST
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Jenni,
I really enjoyed your poem. It was a very good write and was very touching.
Nathan

Re: arise with HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 08:44:35 PM AEST
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Jennittude, That was so very uplifting. Love coming into your life as made you a little more optimistic, me thinks *wink*
Beautiful, just as you are my friend.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: arise with HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 05:11:44 AM AEST
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Exactly what I needed to read this evening.
Your write is so uplifting and full of hope. Beautifully ascribed with the lovely words from your beautiful heart. Well done dearest Jenni. Thanks so much for posting this~
Take care.
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M

Re: arise with HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 26th December 2006 @ 10:02:17 AM AEST
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A very effective glimpse of 'Hope-Lifted'
This piece has the breeze of those angels wings...

A sweet promise to cherish...

Peace
Yang

Re: arise with HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 24th April 2007 @ 11:43:31 PM AEST
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Jenni ...

such a shame this was not read and commented on more.
What a wonderfully inspiring piece!!! I'd like to print this out and
paste it to my bathroom mirror .. then any morning that I awake
with the ache of a defeated soul, I can just read this and know
there is always a light. :)

Excellent job here, hun! Truly a gem!

~Breezy

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