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Array ( [sid] => 129059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the world [time] => 2006-12-05 13:37:58 [hometext] => i wrote this about the world.. something i've written recently.. since i haven't written in decades lolz [bodytext] => Darkness decays
vengence plays
while the heart repays
your loss
their gain
opposing sides left in the shame
the hand you smack is the hand you cry out for
mouth spewing curses
repeating the same verses
over and again
your all stuck with your own sin
make amends
hatred ends

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the world

Contributed by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:37:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Darkness decays
vengence plays
while the heart repays
your loss
their gain
opposing sides left in the shame
the hand you smack is the hand you cry out for
mouth spewing curses
repeating the same verses
over and again
your all stuck with your own sin
make amends
hatred ends

JENNI

Copyright © PhantomVampyress ... [ 2006-12-05 13:37:58]
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Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 01:44:33 PM AEST
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wow i like this. it's got a sweet ring to it when you hum it. Such a sence of the world and finally someone who see's the world in the way i do. welcome back to ypdc.

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 06:07:25 PM AEST
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You go girl~ Your well penned words are spot on. Short and to the point. Well done dearest Jenni~ I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks so much for posting it~
warm huggers,
Sue M
PS It's great to see you posting again :-)

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 10:40:37 PM AEST
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Right on, Jennittude. I really dug this. Very well written. Glad to see you writing again.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:35:41 PM AEST
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Flows spectacularly. And as i read I feel as though a speed up as the anger builds in the poem. Its like someone about to Blow. Cool

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Errious on Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:36:58 PM AEST
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cool. i really like this. i like how it builds tension up and how it ends on 'ends'.

Tom

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 10th December 2006 @ 03:06:07 AM AEST
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Worthy sentiments buried in a metre with a real hook to it.

S

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th December 2006 @ 05:40:17 PM AEST
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Profound piece, like someone else said, short and to the point. Very good insight. Excellent write.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 06:36:32 PM AEST
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This is realy provacitive, sad ain't it, with all the hate in this world i wonder why that is. very beautiful thoughts in this little masterpeice, not to mention how true what you say is. Keep up the good work.

myheartsvoice

Re: the world (User Rating: 1 )
by trueecho on Wednesday, 31st January 2007 @ 04:17:52 PM AEST
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upbeat and pointed at the same time..very nice
trueecho
Mike

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