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Array ( [sid] => 128949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm going to forgive [time] => 2006-12-02 09:36:04 [hometext] => This is a fictional poem [bodytext] => You've done me dirty all of my life.
I kept forgiving you until you slept with my wife.
When we were fourteen, I sold my motorcycle and you stole the money.
I thought it was horrible but you thought it was funny.
You were a lowlife jerk and a crook.
But because you were my best friend, I always let you off the hook.
When I caught you and my wife in bed, I couldn't believe what I saw.
I forgave you for everything else but this was the last straw.
Before I kicked you out of my life, I told you that you don't deserve to live.
That was several years ago and now I'm ready to forgive.
I'm forgiving you because I've learned that I'm dying.
When the doctor told me that I have cancer, I couldn't stop crying.
There's something I have to do and I don't have long.
I'm going to forgive all of the people who have done me wrong. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 13 [informant] => randyjohnson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

I'm going to forgive

Contributed by randyjohnson on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 09:36:04 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You've done me dirty all of my life.
I kept forgiving you until you slept with my wife.
When we were fourteen, I sold my motorcycle and you stole the money.
I thought it was horrible but you thought it was funny.
You were a lowlife jerk and a crook.
But because you were my best friend, I always let you off the hook.
When I caught you and my wife in bed, I couldn't believe what I saw.
I forgave you for everything else but this was the last straw.
Before I kicked you out of my life, I told you that you don't deserve to live.
That was several years ago and now I'm ready to forgive.
I'm forgiving you because I've learned that I'm dying.
When the doctor told me that I have cancer, I couldn't stop crying.
There's something I have to do and I don't have long.
I'm going to forgive all of the people who have done me wrong.

Copyright © randyjohnson ... [ 2006-12-02 09:36:04]
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Re: I'm going to forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by trackiller2006 on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 04:37:25 PM AEST
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Nice. I love it!

Re: I'm going to forgive (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 12:01:27 AM AEST
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i liked this...but there are certain things that i can't imagine forgiving anyone for...even on my death bed....he slept with your wife? i think god, or whoever it is you believe in will understand not forgiving that....i'd say to h*** with forgiving it....but thats me..lol..nice write. i liked it alot.:-)

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